HOMEWORK - A picture paints 1000 words!

Hi bloggers, Today I am going to be talking to you about my HOMEWORK I know it might be a boring blog post but I have to :(

So this picture had to inspire my blog here is the picture!

So yeah that is the picture and lets write something about it!

Just imagine what it would be like if the world was black and grey and the trees have no leaves, just imagine the world would be so much different it would be insane things would be not even things they would be something different. Also there would be no rainbows no nothing really their would be thinfgs but it would be things that are not like normal.

Now look at the nice side it would be like today mabye even better there is farms and trees with colour, and things would be easy to see they would not be grey... Also in the good side their is moutains and hills and grass and happiness not just grey nothingness. Also you could actually see a rainbow not just a grey ling in the sky!

So Bye Bloggers I hope you enjoyed my Blog post!

How to Comment like a pro? Your about to find out!

Hi bloggers, Today I am going to be talking to you guys about how to comment like a pro! So I hope you guys like this idea and lets get into it.

So here are some of the simple steps to posting a comment:

• Makes sure you use some Postive, Thourghtful and Helpful Comments.
• Also make sure its not really small comment try and make it big like at least 100-240 words long that is a good sized comment. 
• Also make sure you put it into paragraphs so that it makes more sense.

So I hope those steps to success help you guys learn ho-w to comment a little bit better! 

Also if you want to make your comments go further you want to ask some questions and then when people awnser that questions, you want to reply back, so you might be able to start a conversation also known as bloggersation!

So I hope you guys like it I will but some of my good comments in now!

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Kia ora, its Zack from Yaldhurst Model School.

I liked the way that you added lts of pictures and how you showed what you wanted to make and then what they turned out like. I also like put some pictures of you making them. I also enjoyed looking at all of these pictures of these cupcakes. I also really liked the colours you used for these cupcakes. You have also inspired me to try making some cupcakes for my birthday or some event like that. I also REALLY like the way that you made a food thing not a painting thing. This is really good I loved looking at it and reading it.

You brought me back to when I was making a biscute at the park on a free park day. Did you think about added some feelings of what some kids liked about it or what they wanted to make next. I also think you could you could write a bit more about the finished product instaed of just putting NAILED IT, that would be a good idea because then people would know what your improvments might be or what you did NAIL.

Next time you could, Also add some more words about what you did and how lon g it took you to make them and also how long it took them to cook. You could you could also make a creative way of presenting this cool blog. Last improvment could be put more pictures of the people making the cupcakes that would make people want to look at the blog post more, because they can see the whole prosedure of making the cupcakes. Lastly I think that you should add more than just we gave the students a vainla cupcake recpie you could defantly make that better.

Anyways Byee Zack from Yaldhurst Model School (I love CUPCAKES YUMMM)

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Maths Diary?

Hi bloggers, Today I am going to be talking to you about my maths work. So first of all we had to finish our work then we could make something of all the maths we are proud of.


I think this was a fun thing to do in maths because you can see all of the things that you have done in your maths and you can see how you improve over the term. I also think this is a good idea because it means you can do something a little bit different than maths.


What I learnt of this maths work is that I am getting really good at maths really fast I have gone from doing graphs to dividing decmials, so I think that is really good and now I am getting close to the next thing aswell so its a bonus really! I also learnt that i am understanding my maths better not just asing for help 24/7 like I used to do so I am really proud of that.


I made my work about what I have done this term in maths its sort of like a animation in a way bit it is a little bit better! Also I used different ways everytime not just the same everytime.

Here is someof the things I have done:

• Dividing Decmials.
• Scatter Graphs.
• Maths Week (Builing a bridge)
• Problem solving (Using negtive numbers)

Here is the slide that I have made so far.
Bye bloggers!

Pie Corbett?

Hi bloggers, Today I am going to be talking to you about Pie Corbett Poems that Right Pie Corbett Poems. So first of all I am going to be talking to you about what my Poem was about, My poem was about The Painful Playground, Its about how parts of the playground hurt you. This Poem was Inspired by Pie Corbett also Pie Corbett Wrote a Poem called the Playground Monster that what I got my idea off.


I liked doing this because we were able to write our own Poem with our own ideas. This was fun because we were all able to think outside of the box with our Poemś.

Here is my Poem:

Painful playground

The slide Burn, The high Speeds, Getting shot of the end, Slide the Slide it will hurt your pride, The sore Sore behind,
Oh Bridge oh Bridge stop hurting me My Knee My Knee hit you tum-e, Oh Bridge Oh Bridge please play with me.
The Pole The Pole it ate me up And spewed me into a cup,
The rock wall, You get half way up and it shoots you back down BANG”onto the bark grazes and cuts and body parts. 
The flying fox tried to fight me it tried to pull me back no more fun no more joy...

So I hope you guys enjoyed reading my Poem.

What I learnt off this is that its not really easy to come up with your own ideaś it really hard!

Bye bloggers!!!!!!

I AM BACK!!

Hi bloggers, Today I am here to talk to you about going to Aussie. I am really happy to be back and blogging again I hope you guys haven't been getting worried that I am gone... Lol So lets get into it.

First of all I am here to tell you what I liked about my amazing trip. We got picked up at 1pm in the afernoon to go to the airport when we got to the air port we checked in and went through customs, I did not like that part because we had to wait in line for a long time I have been through customs lots of times so I knew what it would be like. Our flight was 4 hours long from NZ to Aussie. When we got their I got into my togs and went into the swimming pool, our room had 2 floors because we got upgraded.

The next day we went to a theme park called Movie World this was my fifth time going to movie world. Before I left home I said to my friend that I would go on the scariest ride at Movie World here is a video of it.




So I hope you guys like the video we did much more in Aussie. Went went on a road trip and not a 2 seated bike and ride it around I will get some Pictures of that so I hope you like it!

Here are some more pictures:

I went sky diving!