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Friday 27 September 2019

How to Comment like a pro? Your about to find out!

Hi bloggers, Today I am going to be talking to you guys about how to comment like a pro! So I hope you guys like this idea and lets get into it.

So here are some of the simple steps to posting a comment:

  • Makes sure you use some Postive, Thourghtful and Helpful Comments.
  • Also make sure its not really small comment try and make it big like at least 100-240 words long that is a good sized comment. 
  • Also make sure you put it into paragraphs so that it makes more sense.
So I hope those steps to success help you guys learn ho-w to comment a little bit better! 

Also if you want to make your comments go further you want to ask some questions and then when people awnser that questions, you want to reply back, so you might be able to start a conversation also known as bloggersation!

So I hope you guys like it I will but some of my good comments in now!


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Kia ora, its Zack from Yaldhurst Model School.

I liked the way that you added lts of pictures and how you showed what you wanted to make and then what they turned out like. I also like put some pictures of you making them. I also enjoyed looking at all of these pictures of these cupcakes. I also really liked the colours you used for these cupcakes. You have also inspired me to try making some cupcakes for my birthday or some event like that. I also REALLY like the way that you made a food thing not a painting thing. This is really good I loved looking at it and reading it.

You brought me back to when I was making a biscute at the park on a free park day. Did you think about added some feelings of what some kids liked about it or what they wanted to make next. I also think you could you could write a bit more about the finished product instaed of just putting NAILED IT, that would be a good idea because then people would know what your improvments might be or what you did NAIL.

Next time you could, Also add some more words about what you did and how lon g it took you to make them and also how long it took them to cook. You could you could also make a creative way of presenting this cool blog. Last improvment could be put more pictures of the people making the cupcakes that would make people want to look at the blog post more, because they can see the whole prosedure of making the cupcakes. Lastly I think that you should add more than just we gave the students a vainla cupcake recpie you could defantly make that better.

Anyways Byee Zack from Yaldhurst Model School (I love CUPCAKES YUMMM)
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